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Say the point first

You're presenting in the wrong order.

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The fix

Engineers build up to the conclusion. Decision-makers want it first: recommendation, then three reasons.

Drill · under two minutes

Rewrite the first line of your next email as the decision you want.

Bottom line up front
Opening with the conclusion or request, then giving the support. Common in military and executive writing.
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